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Original: 4/30/2006 1:50 PM
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Sunday, April 30, 2006

 
Nothing.

Nothing---

Empty
Void
Sand Lines in the ground
A trace-but not

What is this territory inside-
Incompatible.

with the outside sun
the w a r m sun  (pointedly)

Stale
Turbulent
Angry winds pick at
Nothing.

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it creates such a mood...
Posted 5/1/2006 7:28 AM by LandOfPictures - reply

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if this is nothing. it is a powerful nothing. i think this poem is strong because so much imagery is in a few words. i also like the effect of spacing on "warm sun"

ryc: thank you. i'll work on improving and try to make prose my speciality
Posted 5/1/2006 9:45 PM by limegreenideas - reply

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