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Original: 5/9/2006 10:38 PM
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Tuesday, May 09, 2006

 

Lost

What?
Who me?
oh nothing; I'm fine
really
just thinking about my friend again
Which one?
Doesn't surprise me you haven't seen her around
in a bit, in a long time
In a very long time, I'll concede

Oh, I'm sorry for the silence
just reflecting on exactly what, where and when
went wrong
Something had to, right?

Useless questions, I know.
these things are grease under the nails
the undetectable crick in the floorboard.

It's nothing, really.

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Visit sublimewriter's Xanga Site!
i like the ambiguity and the inside monologue in someone's head
Posted 5/9/2006 11:41 PM by sublimewriter - reply

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it speaks  and flows as well...
Posted 5/10/2006 7:17 AM by LandOfPictures - reply

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I like the strieght forward delivery of this poem. Nice piece.
Posted 5/11/2006 9:14 PM by bhikkhu1 - reply


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